End It Already

Posted by: Melinda

I'm going to rant a little, and I think it may be a repeat rant, but it deserves stating again.  When the giant climax of a book or movie has occurred, please, please, get the hell to end.  When I worked in Hollywood we called it the "run for the credits".  It should happen very quickly after the final big scene(s).

Look at Lord of The Rings.  From the time Aragorn is crowned and marries Arwen to the parting at the Grey Havens is 70 pages.  And the actual final, climactic battle is the Scouring of the Shire.  I believe that was the point of the book.  So how many pages from the end of the scouring to the parting.  Not very damn many.

Last year I read a fantasy series where the end dragged on for over 200 pages after the damn dragon was released.  Last night I finished another series, that, over all, I enjoyed, but this time it was 117 pages of tie up.

When an ending just keeps retreating in front of you the reader starts to lose that glow of victory, a sense they made the adventure with the characters.  It starts to feel like bookkeeping.  _Okay, tied up that loose end.  Oh what about the queen's maid?  Maybe I better mention her too, etc. etc._

In this area I think screenwriters have it over prose authors.  We know how to get the hell out.  Overall I think working with a foot in both camps has made me a far better prose writer because I can sense when a scene is pointless, or plodding.  My prose writing has made me look for ways to make my dialogue more subtle, and able to carry more weight and meaning.  A win/win all around. 

 

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written by Stephen Leigh, January 29, 2011
I disagree with your take on LOTR. To me, the story is over when the ring goes into Mt. Doom, but what Tolkien tacks on is a terrifically long and rambling denouement. To my mind, Tolkien should have ended the main plot sequence with the marriage of Aragorn; if he really wanted to show Frodo and the others leaving Middle Earth, he should have tacked on a brief Epilogue. The long parting of the company and the Scouring of the Shire are all anticlimactic and unnecessary.
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written by Melindas, January 29, 2011
Oh, Steve, I _love_ you, and I can't wait for you to get to NM and be our GoH at Bubonicon so we can sit over a cup of coffee or a margarita and really have a great long discussion about this! The first few times I read the books I felt exactly the same about the Scouring, but somewhere in my late forties It hit me that this was what he was building to the entire time. The sense of loss and melancholy is so heart wrenching. Maybe because by then I had been diagnosed with Crohns, you begin to realize to have lived more of your life then you have left to live, and the sense of watching things rush away from you becomes so strong. Anyway, I can't wait to discuss all this with you in person. And I find it interesting that you, of all people, find it anticlimactic. You are the most honestly emotional writer I know, and damn if you haven't touched my heart and brought me to tears so many times in your books and your short stories.

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