Comments on: Triumph http://www.melindasnodgrass.com/musings/2007/10/28/triumph/ Rational Life Mon, 13 Oct 2008 23:11:45 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.1.2 By: Steve Stirling http://www.melindasnodgrass.com/musings/2007/10/28/triumph/#comment-1211 Steve Stirling Tue, 30 Oct 2007 17:43:27 +0000 http://www.melindasnodgrass.com/musings/2007/10/28/triumph/#comment-1211 I liked the story. I liked the story.

]]> By: Melinda http://www.melindasnodgrass.com/musings/2007/10/28/triumph/#comment-1212 Melinda Tue, 30 Oct 2007 17:54:23 +0000 http://www.melindasnodgrass.com/musings/2007/10/28/triumph/#comment-1212 Thanks, Steve, that means a lot to me. You are one hell of a fine writer and your comments carry a lot of weight for me. Thanks, Steve, that means a lot to me. You are one hell of a fine writer and your comments carry a lot of weight for me.

]]> By: Steve Stirling http://www.melindasnodgrass.com/musings/2007/10/28/triumph/#comment-1213 Steve Stirling Wed, 31 Oct 2007 16:33:28 +0000 http://www.melindasnodgrass.com/musings/2007/10/28/triumph/#comment-1213 Short form doesn't come naturally to me either; I'm a novelist by inclination. The story was admirably compact, and you got across the essential elements and conflict very nicely with the recursive how-did-we-get-here structure. The cheap uniform was a very nice touch; they actually had equivalents for 'charity boys' at some expensive English schools. Short form doesn’t come naturally to me either; I’m a novelist by inclination.

The story was admirably compact, and you got across the essential elements and conflict very nicely with the recursive how-did-we-get-here structure.

The cheap uniform was a very nice touch; they actually had equivalents for ‘charity boys’ at some expensive English schools.

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